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Wednesday, 27 June 2012

Five Senses

We are learning to make our writing more interesting by adding detail using the five senses.
We thought about a place and then described what we could see, hear, feel, taste or smell.
Here are just a few. Come and read some more in our writing books!
Can you guess where we are?

I can see the big rocks.
I can smell sand.
I can hear the wind.
I can feel the waves.
I can taste sand.

By Ollie


I am at the beach!

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I can see the birds flying out the window.
I can taste the yummy food.
I can smell the yucky air.
I can hear the happy people.
I can feel the bouncy slide bouncing.
By Hanna


I am at Junglerama!


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I can see the people having real fun.
I can feel the blue floor with the black tape.
I can hear the people laughing.
I can smell the white chalk.
By Ava P-R


I am at the gym!

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I can see the fluffiness on my bunny.
I can hear the bunny stomping.
I can smell the hay.
I can feel the warm fluff.
By Serena


I am with my bunny!
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I can see the waves sploshing.
I can hear the seagulls talking.
I can smell the smooth water.
I can taste the salty water.
I can feel the sand.
By Brianna

I am at the beach!






1 comment:

  1. These are great - so cool having their stuff on here, thanks Melanie :)

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