We are learning to make our writing more interesting by adding detail using the five senses.
We thought about a place and then described what we could see, hear, feel, taste or smell.
Here are just a few. Come and read some more in our writing books!
Can you guess where we are?
I can see the big rocks.
I can smell sand.
I can hear the wind.
I can feel the waves.
I can taste sand.
By Ollie
I am at the beach!
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I can see the birds flying out the window.
I can taste the yummy food.
I can smell the yucky air.
I can hear the happy people.
I can feel the bouncy slide bouncing.
By Hanna
I am at Junglerama!
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I can see the people having real fun.
I can feel the blue floor with the black tape.
I can hear the people laughing.
I can smell the white chalk.
By Ava P-R
I am at the gym!
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I can see the fluffiness on my bunny.
I can hear the bunny stomping.
I can smell the hay.
I can feel the warm fluff.
By Serena
I am with my bunny!
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I can see the waves sploshing.
I can hear the seagulls talking.
I can smell the smooth water.
I can taste the salty water.
I can feel the sand.
By Brianna
I am at the beach!